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26-07-05, 10:09 PM
I think a lot of people are using too many descriptive words and some are repeating them. Also I get the feeling of people using big words for effect when a smaller one would do. Put the thesaurus down and be natural.
I like so far too though athaba. Peoples imaginations are funny. I like when people take the story in unexpexted directions.
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