Absolutely beautiful

That sounds strangly close to home for me (as that's how I bet some of the sisters I have been with would like to view me)

I hope you don't mind me saying this but I have always though that there is an eerie beauty that permiates from ones misfortunes and that is what I think you have captured here. In such a short space you've managed to compact a relationship full of fluctuating emotion. I like this.

May i ask, how long have you been writing?