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Default Poem - 06-09-08, 09:38 AM

One of my first poems: You can help me develop this one for postings and opportunities
Title: Cloudless Man
By Sion Lion

Written 03 – OCT – 07

1. As he plays his childhood playing
He always builds his success bridge unknowingly
If he cries, he sees his benefit unknowingly
If he rejoice, he conquer malevolence unknowingly
At bed, he sleeps against strife unknowingly

2. His parents lapses sunk his foundation
That causes his young life in battle
Feed on food from simplicity and shame
Obedience only could find him four corners
Dignity shall prevail street he suffer to reach

3. Never mind what prick his skin
For wisdom his father had given him
An iron shaper concluded hid efforts
An Eye colorere huge sight against segregation
A love talker of the sun and the moon

4. He decided to follow his group
On the muddy road and behind the rocky hills they lived
To serve others he solve their reword in sprit
His ways other learn, whose bread are bought for preservation
Popularity prevented his ways to the edge of life circle

5. Gentleness gives courage to his faith
His opposition losses their sense in Jealousness
A strong Man with many voices of praise
Whose grains are never left on the parth Oh! Birds
Faithfulness and Kindness in perishes his fame.
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