I love it when you scream my name
Pumps up my ego and leads me to treat you this way
Coochie snitches
Tells me who's been there
While the scratches on my back tell on my love affair
When I hit you, you say 'Please'
Pushing on your shoulders means get on your knees
Don't be offended if I mistake you for her
I barely see her and you have much more to offer
One minute has gone by and I am almost done
**** if I care if you didn't have your fun
Say my name again and I'll leave your ass here
But remember what I said, the coochie snitches if some nigga has been there
How could you say that? I love you both
If you don't like how I do things then leave my ass alone
No, baby, don't leave! You bring up my bad childhood
So just stay here and I'll come back when I need to feel good
I knew you'd understand and play your role
You get a scooby snack for doing what you're told

THIS POEM IS RAW, BUT I LIKE IT BECAUSE IT REPRESENTS THE TRUTH ABOUT HOW SOME WOMEN ARE, AND HOW THEY ALLOW THEMSELVES TO BE TREATED. THESE SORT OF WOMEN HAVE NO RESPECT FOR THEMSELF, AND THAT BEING THE CASE, THEY SHOULDN'T EXPECT OTHER PEOPLE TO HAVE RESPECT FOR THEM EITHER. JUST TO CLARIFY, WHEN U MADE REFERENCE TO THE BAD CHILDHOOD IS THAT THE WOMAN'S EXCUSE FOR LETTING MEN USE HER? PERSONALLY I DON'T AGREE WITH THAT, COS THERE ARE LOTS OF PEOPLE WITH BAD CHILDHOODS THAT DO NOT TAKE THE SELF DESTRUCTIVE ROUTE. ON THE OTHER HAND I UNDERSTAND SOME WOMEN ARE NOT CONCIOUSLY AWARE THAT WHATEVER HAPPENED IN THEIR PAST HAS AFFECTED AND/OR INFLUENCED THE PERSON THEY HAVE BECOME IN THE PRESENT. A GOOD POEM OVERALL, AND WELCOME TO THE FORUM niceone.gif

Thank you for welcoming me. Um, your concern on the bad childhood line was comming from the man. This was all the man talking to the woman. He wanted to see if she would leave, and when she tried, he blamed his bad childhood. Thanks again.

Oh right, I thought it was the woman telling the guy not to leave, and it was her with the bad childhood. Ok I get it cos I just reread it. Still a good poem.