HLF wrote:
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With poetry sometimes it is best to take it as-is. I loved this line, "See the blacker the berry the deeper the abyss. Even when we were at the top we looked to the bottom."
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I put this poem up there almost two years ago and this is the first response. I thought it was a very good poembut others must not have thought the same.
HLF, that is also one of my favorite lines. I am glad that you enjoyed it,
Shalom