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i love poetry and have just done this to get my floetry going again if you dontget its ok thats cool if you do thats great. i used to just write about pain and broken hearts but i am trying to venture into other areas. this is rough no twaeking this is just one those thought poems. i the mood i am in right now stay blessed



I am that which i be

Not what you see

I am in the wilderness

I am to who at a crossroads

My mind is up in the clouds

My soul is down by the sea

My heart is wrapped up

Sometimes i feel caught up

I wonder who she be

Then i realise I am me

Fruitfull blessed soul

Wandering to and fro

Listening immersing embracing

I am queen i am loving

me

I am who i be

Not what you see

Think outside of the box...Think in spirit

Act as if it were impossible to fail!!!
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Nice little freestyle thier lady day,

its good you realise you're wonderful! As we allare..
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thanks jason x. one of my friends is performance poet and she tried at one time to get me to go in that direction but i werent feeling it at the time

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Top one Lady Day.

That is ssooooo' nice and so true...

I feel this.

the same could apply!
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Yeah, I was kinda feeling the random deepness of the lines, (yes, I'm a new member)

It seemed as if you were looking for a mirror that reflects not the physical reflection but the true reflection of the inner self, and it seems you found it. Of course this is just my mind's conjecture or interpretation of your verse!

Keep it coming!
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Yeah, I was kinda feeling the random deepness of the lines, (yes, I'm a new member)

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thank you..your words inspire me to keep on writing

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Post imported post - 26-04-05, 07:13 AM
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I love your expression through words.. Your vision of self shines out a ligh tin written form...
I totaly got your poem and I totaly Loved it...
Your a gifted soul.... Write on!!!

P.S. Love the photo enclosed. Thats beautiful....
God Bless

� keep in mind that I’m an artist, and I’m sensitive about my shit.�
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Sorry .. I ment to write...
Your Light within....

� keep in mind that I’m an artist, and I’m sensitive about my shit.�
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