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Reload this Page This is a poem, to all my beautiful black ladies everywhere

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Post imported post - 25-02-05, 11:06 PM

beautiful black lady..
For you..

This is a poem to
bring you to
me, to draw you, pull
you, paint you,
to me

Your looks aren’t specific
The kaleidoscope reflects
Different, depending on, the angle I,
Behold, always unique, always terrific

Always..

When you smile
It radiates what money can never
Buy, when you laugh,
I laugh
It doesn’t take much, but I try
To keep the shine beating,
In the heart of your eyes

When you cry
I won’t.

I prefer to be your dam
To make sure that your
Tears flow, no. further than I am

To wash away, your concerns
Cleanse your fears, that’s the
kind of man, I am, and will be

You’re beautiful.

to the highest pinnacle, of every sense

to see, to listen to, to feel, to smell,
to taste you..

so vital.
Forever…

Up high, on a mountainous view, at nightime,
Sharing the stars ,
we look down
At the lights of life
Colours of blue and red flash.

In almost musical, fashion

In a place of our own
Sitting comfortable, outside chaos,
Eye contact, without words, we share passion

Which lead me to discover, that your lips are soft, moist to kiss

The burning acid test of,

Whether this is,

Love.

L.
O.
V.
E

Infatuated?

deeper into the brown swirls
Of your deep eyes I travel, we unravel
and loose all control, sipping savagely,
the sweet nectar, born around your neck

Tastes so sweet to me…

Gradually,

Find us moving into

Moving poetry.

Liberated from your clothes,

Let your skin breathe
And grip onto mine

don’t feel naked

As were about to intertwine

…..

With this poem

I’m going to bring you to me, and manifest real love

These words on the page, turn the key. And unlock the dove,

Although I see distrust, still stings, from your eyes.

Sit down.

Allow me to be slow... and credentialise

Look into my eyes…examine the truth!

I don’t have boundaries.

No words to lies.
Just let your body be,

Warm…be. Sanctified..

With this poem
I’m going to bring you to me

Too much time wasted
So much heart aching

I’ve come to end the pain
I want to heal, with you

No more breaking. grow stronger, like an,
everlasting flame, with blue and amber colored embers

side by side we can set the world so bright,

So bright, it remembers!

always,

Shining light into darkness

Walking with hands joined in faith

Through war zones, and shattered glass

Real love conquering every shade of hate we face.

For this poem is for you

Written and awake.
To cherish and adore,

To bring you

M.O.R.E..

And more…

Forever more…

AMOUR!

"Never chance...It's Always destiny

Written by

Jason Strachan
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Post imported post - 25-02-05, 11:21 PM

That was very beautiful. Thanks for sharing
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Post imported post - 26-02-05, 03:52 AM

...my pleasure, comesfrom your enjoyment princess. JX
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Post imported post - 26-02-05, 10:32 AM

that poem was tight!!!! clp)

((prays there arebrothers with the name Jason))
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Post imported post - 26-02-05, 05:40 PM

Thank you, Jason that is absolutley beautiful.
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Post imported post - 28-02-05, 12:06 AM

that was a very beautiful poem. I was beginning to think that there werent men out there who felt that way about black women. thanks for proving my wrong.
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Post imported post - 02-03-05, 02:21 AM

WoW!...dat really touched me...I felt that...im going thru a break-up at the moment and i just...felt dat.

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Thanks you ladies, shauny, Caraqueen, gottaluvher, and Nubian 1st, I love you all.

P.S Nubian 1st, I love that picture you've got up, I had to put that on my desktop, a warm illustration of 'black love' X
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You're famous btw!...I posted "The Kaleidoscope Reflects" ......one of the above lines in Google and it pointed me to this thread on Blacknet!
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Post imported post - 09-05-05, 12:28 AM

That was beautiful!
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Post imported post - 09-05-05, 01:20 AM

Now thats more like it.



When the student is ready,the teacher will come.


I aint asking for nothing,just open the door and i\'ll take it myself-James Brown.
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Post imported post - 09-05-05, 09:40 PM

@ jason, nice poem.....thanks

althoughI have to be honest, after reading your last poem which I believe was from your heart.....I dont believe your sincerity here....I think deep down you felt pressured towrite about black women generally,by the reaction to the last poem...I don't believe you love all black women, or maybe your opinionchanged from the last poem.

Just my opinion



Anyhoo...it was still a nice poem and refreshing to hear the words,I still enjoyed it............



thankyou.......................................... ....
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Post imported post - 09-05-05, 10:55 PM

Chi Please understand,

this is a poem. Thats it.

Noargument or debate. Just a poem.

Think of this poem, the same as you would a painting hanging on a wall,or a sculputure.

hate it.

love it.

Beindiffrent about it.

Its all the same to me, i'm just happy, that you actually took the time to read it.

Don'tworryso much aboutthe author, if you would like to get to know me,here ismymsnstrachan2g@hotmail.com lets talk, I'm always open to meeting interesting people,

Iwrote this poem,while praying, that God would bring a beautiful black women into my life, I was going through a lonely stage, and just hopedthat If iwrote this with pure faith the door would open, but anyway, (DONT TRY IT, IT DOESNT WORK lol) Get your ass to the club like everyone else!!!)

Chi, whether thisfeels sincere to you, or it doesn't, is your own wonderful opinion. "all I can do isjust prepear the meal the best I can, whether you enjoy the taste or not,is totally in you."

Ok, that may not be the best analogy, but hopefully you get what I mean

And forthe record your right!!!

I don't love ALL black women.

I dont love ALL white women.

I dont love ALL asian women.

Idont love ALLlatin/hispanicwomen.

Idont love ALLof anyone!!!

This is becausebadminded people are EVERYWHERE, no matter thegender, race, age, location,everywhere!! Its a ****inginvasion!!

Anyone who tells you otherwise is an idiot.

You know what... Let me rectify this...

I LOVE ALL BEAUTIFULWOMEN (with their beautiful hearts, Universally.)

I Love women who love to laugh,

I love women who love to cry,

I love women who like tobe crazy,

I love women who hold youdown,

I love women who like sex (Spank me baby!)

I lovebeautifulwomen universally!!

Universally,

I love,

women.

And thats the last im gonna say about me.

God, I love myself!!
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