Bitches Vs Ladies

jason x · (#1 (**permalink**))

Bitches.

I hate bitches, bitches of every breed
Bitches of every colour, age, race or creed

Bitches, are the main cause of stress in my life,
Before I encountered bitches, there was no stress in my life

Bitches sniff around the clubs hoping to get a bone
Bitches chat your biz
Bitches tell lies
Bitches don’t care whether you live, or whether you die

Bitches can’t see a good man unless he tokin a strap
Bitches don’t respect a man until he gives them a slap!

Lord I hate bitches

But so many are disguised, as ladies and good women
Of who I most prize
Bitches give it up, Ladies give itup..

Bitches do it at hello, Ladies do it slow

Ladies help you grow, plant the seeds and reap the fruits
Bitches will connive, come along and rip your SHIIIT up from the roots

If your’re a lady don’t take any offence to this rhyme,

Because I love all my ladies,

But I don’t love no BITTTCH!

ChubbiChix · (#2 (**permalink**))

Definitly a nice poem. I like the flow and the words you used. I like the Bitches Vs Ladies concept also and would like to see a poem just like this one but about bad dude Vs good dude because Niggaz make bitches, and bitches make niggaz. don't forget that.

jason x · (#3 (**permalink**))

thats true.

thanks. JX

Lucas... · (#4 (**permalink**))

mmmm
nice... and very relevant...

The Watcher · (#5 (**permalink**))

Interesting Jason X

It reminds me of this verse from JayZ a couple a years back...

Sisters get respect, bitches get what they deserve
SIsters work hard, bitches work your nerves
Sisters hold you down, bitches hold you up
Sisters help you progress, bitches will slow you up
Sisters cook up a meal, play their role with the kids
Bitches in street with their nose in your biz
Sisters tell the truth, bitches tell lies
Sisters drive cars, bitches wanna ride
Sisters give-up the ass, bitches give-up the ass
Sisters do it slow, bitches do it fast
Sisters do their dirt outside of where they live
Bitches have n****s all up in your crib
Sisters tell you quick "you better check your homie"
Bitches don't give a ****, they wanna check for your homie
Sisters love Jay cuz they know how 'Hov is
I love my sisters, I don't love no bitch

dimoke · (#6 (**permalink**))

Hello??

What is wrong with you people?? Want is soo nice about this silly of a waster of a poem....confused3

People lie.....cheats and do all sorts.....to be going around writing poems about Bicthes in this manner is just too sleazy.... just taste less me thinks...

If you don't think so, then i will be back with my poem about ass holes and *******s.....yardies.....more ass holes......smoking-devilBut then again, i can see all those.... hhmmmm......i hate moaners....hmmmm...angry black woman...hmmmm...blahhh blahh

The Watcher · (#7 (**permalink**))

Sorry dimke

My point was that it smacked of plagiarism... or in hip hop terms BITING!

dimoke · (#8 (**permalink**))

Ok Monkey.....

Sorry but i saw this hours ago and its just not things civilised and so called educated *poets* should be going around calling literature......yes in a Jay Z rambling nonesense its fine....but when this becomes arts....then we are ancouraging disrespectfull languages towards each other.........

jason x · (#9 (**permalink**))

Look here,

First of all Drunk Monkey, I can bite, whateveri want its not like im selling this? Is it? It was just fun to write..Calm yourself, don't get so exiteble!

itsO.N.L.Y a poem, dont have an orrrrrgaaaasm! "BREATHE" Geeze what are you Jay Z's lawyer? , so protective, dam!

second, Dimoke, your right, this isn't a nice poem. Not everything I write is nice, in fact some of it, is real NASTY, beware next time you see my posts!

Bless.

The Watcher · (#10 (**permalink**))

lol

where is the evidence of my err excitement? confused3

Simple really you took praise for biting, as you say your not selling and its a messageboard so it doesnt matter. However plagiarism is a big thing especially if you are ready to take praise for it.

Be honest, if I never mentioned it would you have said so yourself?

*raises one eyebrow*

jason x · (#11 (**permalink**))

Hell No!

What for, I only stole the concept, I wrote the lyrics MY-SELF, cant you tell the diffrence, between my version and the Jayz lyrics are youhallucinating? or drunk or something? Sober upcuz, slap yourselfand come back your're chatting nonsense,they're lyricallydiffrent.

Look at the lyrics!

Bless.

The Watcher · (#12 (**permalink**))

How you gonna throw insults at me over the net like a little girl and then say...

bless??

WTF??

You acknowledged in you first response to me that you bit it. THEN your attitude was like

"I bit it so what?"

And now you are like

"I didnt bite it"

KMT!!

Fix up look sharp

dimoke · (#13 (**permalink**))

Jason X.....perhaps a course in manners is needed for you dear......now you see why i had a problem with your post in the first place???

There was no need to get all hyped with DrunkMonkeythe way you did.....if you want people here to read your stuff, give respect and take criticism kindly......cause i tell yaa, the real world of Literature is tough......and no whitey Editor from Oxford with his pre conceived prejudice will look at you twice with your profanity that is *Poetry*

jason x · (#14 (**permalink**))

lol, you two make me laugh,...have a nice day niceone.gif

bless.