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Dear black woman, I hear you calling,
I don't sleep anymore, in my nightmares I see you crawling.
They watch me now, because I can hear you calling
they've turn your seeds against you, by feeding them their poison.
Watch it now, some black ain't black,
they're something else my motherso pleasewatch your back.

They've cut your trees,
they've sucked your blood,
these damn parasites won't have enough.
They don´t belong but they have no otherplace to go, this is the last resort,
their last hope,
but still they're lying through their teeth with promises from GOD.

What god is this they speak about,a fake god,
made by corrupt minds, on corrupt meetings,
with corrupt meanings,
this so called god wont stop the revolution,
guns won't stop it, drugs won't stop it,
your suits and ties won't stop it, masons won't stop it,
this revolution won't take place in a material world,
instead it will come from the depth of the chosen souls,
like jedis we share the force, we share the knowledge
and hear your calling.

Dear black woman this is your army,
through Hip Hop we communicate, the metaphor is our code,
only the enlightened ones can decipher it alone.
We hear you mother, your seeds will go,
like lions on the hunt our strength will show.

Dear Africa,
mother, unfortunate are those who steal from you,
they will burn, be reborn and burn again, and again, and again,
and again until the day that the sun will cease to exist.


Peace

Blackfreud...

The time as come for us to change the world
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Post imported post - 02-04-05, 09:10 PM

I would like to have some sort of feedback...

Tell me whatever u want to say about it, do you find it negative,arrogant,whatever...speak your minds.
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Post imported post - 02-04-05, 11:11 PM

Er - wrong forum mate.Poetry andSpoken word is that way ^ .


"One of the heads of the beast seemed to have been fatally wounded, but the wound had healed. The whole earth was amazed and followed the beast".

Good News Bible. Rev. Ch.13 V.3
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Post imported post - 04-04-05, 11:10 AM

I like it, very nice. And you right mansions wont do it, neither will drugs, guns or bling bling.


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I thought it was/is powerful..speaks volumes..like teh twist at the end too!


"Until lions tell the tale, the story of the hunt will always glorify the hunter" - African Proverb
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didn't like it at all


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If you think that the only way you can survive is in the misuse of people,
then you haven't even begun to think about what it means to be human. ~ Dr C.T.Vivian
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...me neither, a bit too "pie in the sky" for my liking
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blackfreud wrote:
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Dear black woman, I hear you calling,
I don't sleep anymore, in my nightmares I see you crawling.
They watch me now, because I can hear you calling
they've turn your seeds against you, by feeding them their poison.
Watch it now, some black ain't black,
they're something else my motherso pleasewatch your back.


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They've cut your trees,
they've sucked your blood,
these damn parasites won't have enough.
They don´t belong but they have no otherplace to go, this is the last resort,
their last hope,
but still they're lying through their teeth with promises from GOD.
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What god is this they speak about,a fake god,
made by corrupt minds, on corrupt meetings,
with corrupt meanings,
this so called god wont stop the revolution,
guns won't stop it, drugs won't stop it,
your suits and ties won't stop it, masons won't stop it,
this revolution won't take place in a material world,
instead it will come from the depth of the chosen souls,
like jedis we share the force, we share the knowledge
and hear your calling.
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Dear black woman this is your army,
through Hip Hop we communicate, the metaphor is our code,
only the enlightened ones can decipher it alone.
We hear you mother, your seeds will go,
like lions on the hunt our strength will show.
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Dear Africa,
mother, unfortunate are those who steal from you,
they will burn, be reborn and burn again, and again, and again,
and again until the day that the sun will cease to exist.
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Peace

Blackfreud...

The time as come for us to change the world
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Who you saying the army is? Hip hop fans/musicians? How are they englightened? In what? Then your end bit, the 'you gonna die sucka' bit, whats all that about then? I'm not feeling this at all...


Emancipate yourself from mental slavery
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go do sumtin about the struggle, not just the moaning.....theres to much talking and not enought walking mate..!

did like the poem though..!
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Post imported post - 08-06-05, 12:39 PM

To Finest G: Please tell everyone what you are doing to help our people.
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