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25-04-05, 12:55 AM
wow, y'all really went deep in analysing/critiquing this piece. i, for one, am glad that f. poet is not faint of heart and didn't run "crying" from all the comments. out of all the comments, i think the one i agree with the most, and the one i find most revelant, in terms of criticism, was backatya...
that said, i found it very hard to read and the fact that i found it hard to read made it hard to me to follow the point intended. i think it needs some editing so that what f. poet is trying to say can be clearer and more focussed.
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