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Reload this Page For reals?.... Naw just plane fake!

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I came to you with the utmost honesty. I boldly offered you my flaws, and let you know the limits of my very being. I opened my chambers and presented you with the entricate details of my soul, and it was so very enticing. I led you to the place were only my thoughts...my desires linger, and you touched, and you tasted my ambitions. I was scolded, and I was scorned, and yet I took it in stride. I taught you how to experience. I removed your restrictions, your reservations, your fears. I gave, and I gave, and I gave you the pleasures...the pain...the knowledge...the essence of the "you" that you longed for in only your most vivid of dreams. Now,the layers are removed. The newness worn. Time for reciprecation. Time for you to show ME, teach ME, impact MY world. You took license to judge my intentions, while you hid...and you re-worded, and scrambled to make excuses. You were a fake and a fraud. Hiding your ills behind the insecurities that you tried to impregnate me with? And you dare judge?
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I came to you with the utmost honesty. I boldly offered you my flaws, and let you know the limits of my very being. I opened my chambers and presented you with the entricate details of my soul, and it was so very enticing. I led you to the place were only my thoughts...my desires linger, and you touched, and you tasted my ambitions. I was scolded, and I was scorned, and yet I took it in stride. I taught you how to experience. I removed your restrictions, your reservations, your fears. I gave, and I gave, and I gave you the pleasures...the pain...the knowledge...the essence of the "you" that you longed for in only your most vivid of dreams. Now,the layers are removed. The newness worn. Time for reciprecation. Time for you to show ME, teach ME, impact MY world. You took license to judge my intentions, while you hid...and you re-worded, and scrambled to make excuses. You were a fake and a fraud. Hiding your ills behind the insecurities that you tried to impregnate me with? And you dare judge?
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very good start but the end....:?


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