[align=center]Don't move![/align]
[align=center]Nor even slightly stir.[/align]
[align=center]We must not lose the magic of this moment,[/align]
[align=center]to the doubts and demons of the past.[/align]
[align=center]Let there be no clamoring world beyond[/align]
[align=center]the door.[/align]
[align=center]No saboteurs who would destroy us[/align]
[align=center]for their pleasure.[/align]
[align=center]Only the reality that is now.[/align]
[align=center]Only us.[/align]
[align=center]Ever so sweetly,[/align]
[align=center]so gently,[/align]
[align=center]continue to breathe upon my shoulder.[/align]
[align=center]As we both remember[/align]
[align=center]magic,[/align]
[align=center]until the morning[/align]
[align=center]comes.[/align]
[align=center]Until the morning[/align]
[align=center]comes.[/align]

HMMMMMMMM.....

Yo LOB playa, ur poetry is da bomb..damn!

Am feelin ur plot and use of words though Imagery might have refined da whole piece. Its incredibly simple but has meaning in it.

Stay up wid da good stuff. U got potential.