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Post imported post - 21-04-07, 04:41 PM

R.I.P

he sat me down after the grinding, slow bumping, all night kissing and huging
told me how things had taken a turn
that he meet a new girl
and her name was lacey
said how it was now her turn

made me bite my tongue
nearly choked on the damn thing

all the time invested on this brother
my money
my life
my love
my bed

he must have fell and bumped his head
to think i was just going to leave like a fool

he teased me
thought he loved me
yet he betrayed me
and now he wants lacey
or stacey
he must be crazy
talking about how its her turn

switched on me
once i let him in
had me thinking
i was his one and only"

kissed my teeth and i turned
faced him
grabbed for the empty bottle on the floor
the wine he used in seducing me
and smashed it over his head

RIP
lover

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Post imported post - 23-04-07, 03:32 PM

personally, I find this poem verydistasteful.

Hated it.

makes me wonder what kind of person you are


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Post imported post - 23-04-07, 05:38 PM

Everyone is intitled to their own opinion.

But thanks for letting me know your's, actually this was a reconstruted version of a poem that i heard at an open mic night.

Just wanted to share it with BNvillagers.
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PS. it does not reflect who I am at all, its just a situation that someone went through and parts of the poem has been over hyped to make people wonder.
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Post imported post - 23-04-07, 08:11 PM

wonder about what?

how to plagiarize someone else's work?

anyway, thanks for sharing


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Post imported post - 17-05-07, 03:44 PM

i am not plagiarizing anyones work, quite a few people read poems or things that they find amusing or that they can relate to and become inspired to create their own versions or simular written pieces, this does not mean they are plagiarizing *what is this are we in school??* besides its just something that is being shared on BNvillage i am not publishing it ....so please relax!



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I'm relaxed.....but itis still plagiarizing

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