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Post You! (my first and maybe my last poem) - 06-02-08, 02:26 AM

That smile was enough to make me fall for you
The talks make feel at ease with you to.
Your touch, makes me want you, like my déjà vu.

The hugs are for my protection
And your looks are for my attention

Your hands are there for me to hold
Kisses are done when untold

To hear your voice is sweet to hear
Let me have you instead of the bear

All these lines are totally untrue
So don’t let me hear you call me your boo
That smile was enough to make me realise the clue.

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Default 07-02-08, 11:28 PM

Keep writing - i liked the piece - I could hear it as I read almost like a reminiscent diary entry or even as an answer phone message. Peace



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